Very Well Done!
This was a beautiful game. I'm glad that the items you collected actually made sense rather than some click and point games. Anyways- It was beautiful but you should probably next time have someone else write out your story. It's not that your story was bad- but they way it was told. The ending part seemed a little rushed, and since it's being told as a story, don't be afraid to add details to the event ect. Besides the actual story telling you did great. There wasn't too many scares to where you expected it everywhere, and it was VERY well animated!